Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tu respuesta es muy breve y no desarrolla la idea. Para mejorar, responde primero con una oración completa y luego añade detalles concretos (por ejemplo, por qué no tuviste una bicicleta, si deseabas una, o si usabas otro medio de transporte). Usa conectores para unir ideas y mantén hasta cinco oraciones en total.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school. However, I remember wanting one very much and borrowing a neighbor's bike on weekends. As a result, I spent most afternoons playing soccer instead.

提案: La respuesta aborda la pregunta pero contiene errores gramaticales y falta de detalles específicos. Para mejorar, usa oraciones completas, corrige la gramática (por ejemplo: "it is popular" → "they are popular"; "government started prepare" → "the government started preparing"), añade razones y ejemplos concretos sobre dónde y por qué son populares, y usa conectores para la coherencia.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country, especially in urban areas. In the past year the government started preparing dedicated bike lanes in several cities to improve safety. Because of this, more people are choosing bikes for short commutes and exercise. For instance, I've noticed many students and office workers cycling to work during weekdays.

× No, I didn't have.

✓ No, I didn't.

The original sentence 'No, I didn't have.' is incomplete because 'have' requires an object when used in the simple past without context (e.g., 'have a bike'). The examiner's question asks about possession of a bike, so the short negative answer should use the auxiliary only: 'No, I didn't.' This omits the main verb because it is understood from the question. Suggestion: Use the short form 'No, I didn't.' when the verb is understood from the previous question, or complete the sentence as 'No, I didn't have a bike.' if you want a full sentence.

× Yes, it's very popular.

✓ Yes, they're very popular.

The student answers about 'bikes' (plural). The original 'it's very popular' uses singular 'it is', which disagrees with the plural subject 'bikes'. Use 'they're' (they are) to match the plural noun: 'Yes, they're very popular.' Alternatively, repeat the noun: 'Yes, bicycles are very popular.' Suggestion: Identify the subject (singular or plural) and make the pronoun and verb agree in number.

× In the last year government started prepare highway for bicycles in the city.

✓ Last year the government started preparing highways for bicycles in the city.

There are several tense and verb form issues. 'In the last year' is better as 'Last year' for past reference. 'Started prepare' is incorrect because after 'start' when referring to an action in progress you should use the -ing form: 'started preparing'. 'Highway' should be plural 'highways' or 'a highway' depending on meaning; 'highways' fits if multiple routes were worked on. Also include the article 'the' before 'government' in English: 'the government'. Suggestion: Use 'the government started preparing highways' or 'the government started to prepare a highway' depending on intended meaning; ensure 'start' is followed by either infinitive or -ing appropriately and keep consistent past tense.