Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Correct factual tense and vocabulary mistakes: use past tense and correct noun. Keep answer natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. For example, say you had a bike, when you got it, and a detail about how you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident cycling on busy roads.

提案: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and enrich content with specific reasons or comparisons. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting points using linking words like "because" or "for example." Be specific about where or among which groups bikes are popular.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters cycling to work, and in rural areas children often ride bikes for fun.

× Yes, I do have a Mac when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present tense 'do have' with the past time expression 'when I was a child'. This is a past tense context, so use the simple past 'had'. Also the noun 'Mac' is incorrect for the question about a bike; it should be 'bike' to answer the question directly. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time reference (use past for past time expressions) and answer with relevant vocabulary.

× In my opinion, yes, it is popular in my country.

✓ In my opinion, yes, they are popular in my country.

The question asks about 'bikes' (plural). Using 'it' (singular) causes a pronoun reference error and the verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject. Use the plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are' to agree with 'bikes'. Suggestion: identify the number (singular/plural) of the noun being discussed and make pronouns and verbs agree with that number.