Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, clarity and add brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence using the correct past tense, then give one or two specific details (where, when, or why). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences) and use a linking word if adding a reason or contrast.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a busy city where traffic made cycling unsafe, so my parents preferred I walk or use public transport. However, my friends often rode bikes around the park, which I enjoyed watching.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and immediately add specific supporting details and a linking word to explain why. Use one or two concise sentences with relevant vocabulary (e.g., commuting, environment, traffic) to make the answer more informative and natural.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in larger cities you can see dedicated bike lanes and many students and office workers cycle to save time and money.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'don't have' while referring to a past time frame 'when I was a child'. This is a tense error. Use the simple past 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense for actions or states that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I didn't have', 'I had'). Relevant grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes.

✓ Yes, they are.

The one-word reply 'Yes.' is grammatically acceptable in casual speech but does not clearly answer the examiner's question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' A fuller affirmative sentence 'Yes, they are.' supplies the correct subject 'they' (bikes) and verb 'are' to match plural subject and present simple tense. Suggestion: give a complete sentence when possible to show subject-verb agreement and clarity (e.g., 'Yes, they are popular in my country.'). Relevant grammar problem type ID: 27