Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: khi nào, ai tặng, bạn thường đi đâu). Giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu, dùng từ nối nếu thêm thông tin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to a nearby park every afternoon. It was a simple, red bicycle with a basket, which made it perfect for short trips. Riding with my friends helped me gain confidence and stay active.

提案: Bạn lại lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì đưa ra ý kiến. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu quan điểm rồi đưa thêm lý do, ví dụ hoặc so sánh cụ thể để làm rõ. Dùng từ nối (for example, however, because) để mạch lạc. Giới hạn trong tối đa 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in urban areas. Many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient, and some cities have dedicated bike lanes. However, car ownership is growing, so bikes are more common among students and environmentally conscious people.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correct response should be a statement in past tense to answer the past-tense question. Use past simple 'had' for possession in the past and form a full sentence: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: answer questions directly using appropriate tense and include a subject and verb. ID:26

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correct response should be a statement in present tense to answer the present-tense question. Use 'I think' plus a complement: 'Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country.' Suggestion: provide a clear opinion and supporting detail rather than echoing the question. ID:26