Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your reply repeats the examiner's question and is unclear. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Keep it natural, avoid mirroring the question, and use correct grammar and pronouns. For example, say whether you had a bike, give a brief reason or memory, and use linking words if needed.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon. Because my neighborhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing there and I eventually learned to ride without training wheels.

提案: Your answer again repeats the question and changes its focus (from your country to Europe), which does not address the examiner's prompt. Answer directly about your country, give specific reasons or examples, and use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'however'). Also avoid asking questions back to the examiner.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and bike lanes have improved recently.

× Did you did you have a bike when you?

✓ Yes. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence repeats the auxiliary 'did' and omits the subject at the end, resulting in an incorrect question form and unclear meaning. The examiner asked a past-question, so the student should answer in the past tense. Use a simple past affirmative sentence: subject + past verb (I had). Also include the time expression 'when I was a child' to match the question. Avoid duplicating 'did' and ensure a complete clause.

× Do you think bikes are popular in Europe?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in my country?

The examiner asked specifically about 'your country'. The student's reply changes the reference to 'Europe', which alters the meaning rather than correcting grammar. This is a contextual/pronoun/reference issue: use 'my country' or name the country to answer appropriately. If the student intended to ask back, they should say 'Do you think bikes are popular in Europe?' as a question, but here they should answer about their own country.