Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar dan bentuk waktu (tense). Jawaban harus langsung dan ringkas (maksimal 5 kalimat), dimulai dengan kalimat topik lalu detail pendukung bila perlu. Gunakan past simple untuk kejadian di masa lalu: contoh "I had a bike when I was a child." Tambahkan satu atau dua detail spesifik untuk memperkaya jawaban, gunakan kata penghubung jika menambahkan informasi.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park.

提案: Perbaiki kejelasan dan tata bahasa, hindari suara ragu- ragu seperti "umm" dan pengulangan. Jawaban harus singkat dan secara langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu berikan alasan spesifik atau contoh. Gunakan struktur yang koheren dan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide (e.g., "because", "however"). Hindari kata-kata tidak jelas seperti 'this'.

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorcycles for commuting. For instance, many families own scooters due to convenience and cost.

× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The speaker is referring to a past time ('when I was a child'), so present tense 'have' is incorrect and should be past 'had' (Grammar problem type 6). Also 'were' is incorrect for singular first person in simple past; the correct past form is 'was' (subject-verb agreement / past tense). Use 'had' for possession in the past and 'was' as the past form of 'to be'. Suggestion: Use past simple for both verbs when talking about past facts: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× This uh, in my country only people use motorcycle.

✓ Umm, in my country only people use motorcycles.

The noun 'motorcycle' refers to a countable item used by many people, so the plural 'motorcycles' is required after 'people use' (Grammar problem type 1). Also include a subject and smoother phrasing: start with 'Umm' and remove filler 'This uh'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after verbs referring to general actions by multiple people: 'people use motorcycles.'