Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a topic sentence (yes/no) and one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and avoid repetition. Use linking words if you add reasons or examples (for example, because, so, when).

例: Yes — I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven. It had training wheels at first, but I learned to ride without them within a few months, so I was very proud.

提案: Again you repeated the question and made a grammatical error (“a bikes”). Instead, answer directly and give specific supporting details, using linking words to connect points. Mention who uses bikes, where they are popular, or reasons for popularity to make your answer informative.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and university towns because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and commuters choose bicycles to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer, resulting in a sentence that does not respond. This is a sentence structure/communication error (type 26). Suggestion: Answer in the past tense to match 'Did you...?' Use 'Yes, I had...' or 'No, I didn't have...' to provide a clear response.

× Do you think a bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used the article 'a' before the plural noun 'bikes', which is incorrect. This matches article/definite-article errors (type 22) and incorrect use of articles (type 17). Suggestion: Remove the article when using a plural noun ('bikes') or change to singular with matching verb and context ('a bike is'). The correct form here is 'bikes' with no article: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'.