Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cải thiện sự tự nhiên và ngữ pháp: dùng thì phù hợp (had thay vì have), chỉnh cấu trúc mệnh đề quan hệ và động từ (gave thay vì give). Tránh câu dài không cần thiết; giữ tối đa 3-4 câu. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ màu sắc, kỷ niệm ngắn) và dùng từ liên kết nếu cần.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my eighth birthday, and it was bright red. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon, which helped me make friends in the neighborhood.

提案: Cải thiện tính rõ ràng và chính xác: trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No or degree), dùng từ vựng phù hợp (bikes, popular, transportation), tránh lỗi lựa chọn từ và ngữ pháp. Trình bày ý chính rồi đưa 1-2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because). Giữ 2-3 câu ngắn.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Vietnam, especially motorbikes. They are a common mode of transport because they are affordable and can navigate narrow streets easily. For example, many people use motorbikes to commute to work and to run errands.

× Yes, I have. When I was a child I used to have a bicycle, which was a gift that my parents give to me on my birthday.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I used to have a bicycle, which was a gift that my parents gave me on my birthday.

Present tense issue (ID 6) and Past tense issue (ID 5) and Incorrect use of verb form: the student used 'have' and 'give' incorrectly for past contexts. Use 'did' in short answers for past questions (Did you have...?), and use past simple 'gave' for actions that happened in the past. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'gave' (gave me, not gave to me). Add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× I don't think festival is the most popular tourist among citizens by contract.

✓ I don't think festivals are the most popular means of transportation among citizens by contrast.

Sentence structure error (ID 26) and Singular and plural issue (ID 1) and Incorrect word choice: 'festival' should be plural 'festivals' to match general meaning, and 'tourist' is the wrong noun—use 'means of transportation'. 'By contract' is incorrect; likely meant 'by contrast'. The corrected sentence uses plural noun agreement and a proper phrase to express comparison.

× Multiple ways are the most prominent means of transportation in Vietnam because it allows citizens to travel flexibly through downstairs.

✓ Various modes are the most common means of transportation in Vietnam because they allow people to travel flexibly on different routes.

Incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and Incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives (ID 12/13): 'Multiple ways' is unnatural; use 'various modes' or 'different modes'. Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'ways' is plural so use 'they allow' not 'it allows'. 'Through downstairs' is incorrect—likely intended 'on different routes' or 'around the city'. The corrected sentence fixes number agreement, word choice, and prepositional phrase.