Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a slightly longer, direct answer with one or two specific details to make it more natural and informative. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail (where you rode it, who taught you, or what you liked about it). Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if you add details.

例: Yes, I did — I had a red bicycle when I was about eight. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every afternoon, and my older brother taught me how to balance and change gears.

提案: Respond with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then give specific supporting reasons and use linking words to connect ideas. Correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like "in nowadays." Mention examples or groups who use bikes and any trends (commuting, leisure, exercise). Keep the answer concise (1–4 sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes and exercise; moreover, cycling clubs and bike lanes in cities have encouraged both children and young adults to ride more.

× Yes, ride bikes.

✓ Yes, people ride bikes.

The original fragment 'Yes, ride bikes.' lacks a clear subject and is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Adding the subject 'people' completes the sentence and matches the question about general use of bikes.

× It's a good way to exercise for people, for kids, for young men in nowadays.

✓ It's a good way for people, children, and young men to exercise nowadays.

This sentence contains multiple problems: incorrect word order and awkward phrasing with the time expression 'in nowadays'. The primary grammar type is present tense/word order issue (ID 6 and 26). Correct structure places 'nowadays' at the end and uses parallel noun forms ('people, children, and young men') and the infinitive 'to exercise' after 'a good way'. Also replace 'kids' with the more formal 'children' for register consistency. Suggestions: use parallel lists, place time expressions correctly (usually at end or beginning), and use 'a good way to' + verb or 'a good way for X to' + verb depending on emphasis.