Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct answer (yes/no or brief statement) and add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural, concise (max 5 sentences), and use linking words if you add details (for example, "because", "so", "and").

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and to the nearby park almost every day because it was faster than walking.

提案: Your answer gives a clear opinion but is too general and absolute ("everybody"). Add a specific reason or example and use a linking word to make it more convincing. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., "widespread", "common", "used for"). Keep it within five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For instance, students and office workers often prefer bicycles for their low cost and convenience, especially in congested urban areas.

× I think bikes are popular in my country and everybody uses it.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country and everybody uses them.

The noun 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to it must also be plural. Using 'it' (singular) with 'bikes' is incorrect. Change the pronoun to 'them' to match number and maintain subject-pronoun agreement. Suggestion: always ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents; replace singular pronouns with plural ones when referring to plural nouns.