Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is grammatically correct and directly addresses the question, but it is very short and lacks supporting detail. To improve, give a brief topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (a reason, a memory, or contrast) using a linking word. Keep your response natural and under five sentences.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived close by, and my parents preferred me to use public transport for longer trips. However, I remember borrowing my neighbour’s bike sometimes, which was fun on weekends.

提案: Your answer communicates the main idea but is repetitive and contains minor grammatical issues. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases, add a specific reason or example, and use linking words for coherence. Limit to up to five sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., 'affordable', 'common', 'widely used').

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. For example, many people use bicycles for short trips to shops and schools, and cities often have dedicated bike lanes, which encourages cycling.

× Yes, bikes are really popular in my country because that is one of the most affordable mode of commute or transportation in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country because they are one of the most affordable modes of commute or transportation in my country.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so references to it must be plural: use 'they' not 'that'. Also 'one of the most affordable' requires a plural noun 'modes' rather than the singular 'mode'. Change 'commute' (a verb or noun in different contexts) to 'commuting' or keep 'transportation'; here 'modes of commuting or transportation' or 'modes of transportation/commuting' are correct. Suggestion: use 'they are one of the most affordable modes of transportation' for clarity.

× So that is why they are very popular in here.

✓ So that is why they are very popular here.

The prepositional phrase 'in here' is redundant and unidiomatic in this context. Use 'here' without 'in'. Also avoid repeating 'that is why' after an explanatory clause; it's acceptable but concise form 'So they are very popular here.' is clearer. Suggestion: remove 'in' and simply say 'here'.