Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is direct and grammatical, which is good. To improve, make the response slightly more natural and informative by adding one or two brief supporting details (reason, memory, or consequence). Use a linking word if you add details. Keep answers concise (≤5 sentences).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a very hilly area and walking was easier. However, I often borrowed my friend’s bike on weekends, which helped me learn to ride.

提案: The first sentence answers the question, but the second is unclear and awkward. Improve by giving specific reasons or examples and avoid insensitive wording. Use linking words (e.g., because, for example, as a result) and accurate vocabulary (e.g., prefer cycling for transport or exercise). Keep sentences natural and concise.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and for exercise. For example, you can see groups of cyclists in parks and city bike-sharing schemes are widely used.

× 'Most especially the people are quite obese for exercising.'

✓ 'Especially, people in my country are quite obese and do not exercise much.'

'Most especially' is awkward and nonstandard here; 'especially' is sufficient. The original sentence misuses 'for exercising' to mean 'in terms of exercise' — use a clause that clarifies the idea (e.g., 'do not exercise much'). Also adjust word order: 'the people' is unnatural when speaking generally; use 'people in my country' or simply 'people'. This correction keeps present tense to match the question about current popularity.'