Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer does not address the question. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering directly (e.g., “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t”), then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep your response natural, relevant, and under five sentences. Use linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) if you add reasons.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for my sixth birthday, and I used it to ride to a friend’s house every weekend because it was sturdy and comfortable.

提案: Your answer tries to respond but has grammatical errors, repetition, and lacks specific detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “Yes, bikes are very popular in my country.”). Then give one or two specific reasons and an example, using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Also correct grammar (use articles and proper word order) and avoid repeating words.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting due to heavy traffic and low costs. For example, in my city you can see cyclists on almost every street during rush hour, especially students and delivery workers.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular my country because all the people people are use bike anytime, anywhere.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because people use bikes anytime, anywhere.

Errors: missing preposition 'in' before 'my country' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11), duplicated word 'people' (Sentence structure error, ID 26), incorrect verb form 'are use' instead of 'use' (Subject-verb agreement / verb form, ID 27 and 9). According to instructions only correct mistakes that meet the provided list: primary issue is sentence structure (ID 26) which covers word order and duplication; additionally the missing preposition corresponds to ID 11 and the verb form to ID 27. Correction: add 'in' before 'my country', remove duplicate 'people', and change 'are use bike' to 'people use bikes' (plural subject and plural noun agreement). Suggestions: ensure prepositions are included with location phrases ('in my country'), avoid repeating words, use the base verb form with plural subjects ('people use'), and match count between nouns and quantifiers ('bikes' not 'bike').