Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子意思表达基本清楚，但存在词汇误用和语法问题。“thorough”用错了，应为“young”或“a child”。回答太简短且缺乏细节。建议：1) 使用正确词汇（young/ a child/ a kid）；2) 给出一到两句具体细节（例如颜色、是否喜欢骑、和谁一起骑等）；3) 使用连接词使句子连贯，如“and”、“which”、“so”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 回答太简短且没有解释理由或例子。需要直接回答并提供支持细节，使用连接词展开观点。建议：1) 给出完整句子（例如“No, they are not very popular”）；2) 说明原因（如交通、基础设施、气候或文化）并举例；3) 可比较其他交通方式以增加内容。

例: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because many people prefer cars and public transport. For example, cities often lack safe bike lanes, so cycling can feel dangerous.

× I did have a bike when I was thorough.

✓ I did have a bike when I was young.

句子中使用了单词“thorough”，该词意思是“彻底的/详尽的”，不符合上下文（询问童年）。应使用表示童年时期的形容词“young”。另外，原句的时态（过去时，用 did have）是可以的，所以只需替换错误的词。建议：在表达年龄或童年时，用 young、a child、when I was a child 等短语。

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't think so.

回答问题“Do you think bikes are popular in your country?”时，直接说“No, I don't.”在语法上非明确错误，但不够自然完整。更常见的回答是“No, I don't think so.”（现在时），表示对问题的否定观点。建议：回答观点类问题时使用完整的从句（I think so / I don't think so）以更清晰地表达立场。