Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız soruya cevap vermiyor; sınav sorusunu tekrar etmişsiniz. Soruyu doğrudan ve kısa bir konu cümlesiyle yanıtlayın. Ardından gerekli ise tek veya iki destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Cümle sayısını 5’i geçirmeyin ve gereksiz tekrarlar yapmayın. Örneğin çocukken bisikletiniz olup olmadığını belirtin, varsa kimden aldığınızı veya nasıl kullandığınızı kısaça anlatabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was about six years old. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me, and I used to ride it every afternoon in the park. Learning to ride helped me become more independent, and I often practiced with my older sister until I felt confident.

提案: Cevabınız soruya doğrudan cevap veriyor fakat dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve doğru zaman ile kelime formlarını kullanın. Daha spesifik detaylar ekleyin (kimlerle, nerede, ne sıklıkla) ve cümleleri 3–4 cümle ile sınırlandırın.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in Azerbaijan, especially in cities and among young people. I often cycle with my friends every weekend along the riverside, which is both healthy and affordable. However, cycling is less common in some rural areas due to long distances and limited bike lanes.

× I also love ride bicycle with my friends every weekend and that's all.

✓ I also love riding a bicycle with my friends every weekend.

The verb 'love' is followed by a gerund when talking about activities (verb + -ing). Use 'riding' instead of 'ride'. Also add the article 'a' before 'bicycle' because a singular, countable noun needs an article. Remove 'and that's all' because it is unnecessary and informal here. Suggestions: use 'love' + gerund for activities, include appropriate articles for singular countable nouns.

× I live in Azerbaijan and I think it's a very popular.

✓ I live in Azerbaijan and I think they're very popular.

The original sentence has several problems: 'it' refers to 'bikes' which is plural, so use 'they' (plural pronoun). Also 'a very popular' is incorrect because 'popular' is an adjective that needs a noun or must modify a plural noun without 'a'. Correct is 'they're very popular' (they are very popular). Suggestions: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and avoid using 'a' before adjectives without a noun.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of giving a proper answer. Use a short answer 'Yes, I did.' followed by a past simple statement 'I had a bike when I was a child.' Suggestions: when answering past questions, use past simple tense and provide a brief confirmation plus detail.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply 'Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country.' is mostly acceptable informally, but ensure consistent register: use 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' No grammatical change needed except register. Suggestions: prefer 'Yes' over 'Yeah' in formal contexts and keep the sentence concise.