Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should answer directly with a topic sentence, then add 1–2 short supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and relevant. For example, state whether you had a bike, then add where/when you used it and a brief reason or memory.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was eight and used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because our neighborhood was quiet, my parents felt it was safe for me to cycle around.

提案: Your answer changed the key word (“bikes” → “bags”) and repeated the examiner's question instead of giving an opinion. For this question you should answer directly (Yes/No or short opinion), then give 1–2 specific supporting details with linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep vocabulary relevant and avoid repeating the question.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes in cities. For example, in the mornings you often see students and office workers cycling to work to avoid traffic and save money.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student's reply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error. The correct response uses past simple tense 'had' to match the question 'Did you have...?' and provides a subject and verb. Suggestion: Answer with a complete sentence in past simple (Yes/No + subject + past verb), e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bags are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's answer changed the key noun 'bikes' to 'bags', which does not respond to the examiner's question and breaks cohesion between question and answer. This is a sentence content/structure error. Suggestion: Repeat or adapt the noun from the question when clarifying or answering; if answering, reply with a full sentence such as 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or if clarifying the question, ask 'Do you mean bikes or bags?'.