Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сделайте ответ более естественным и расширьте его кратким объяснением, используя связку. Избегайте односложных ответов; добавьте тему и одну-две поддерживающие фразы (не более 5 предложений).

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I often borrowed my friends’ bikes to ride around the neighborhood. I remember enjoying short rides to the park on weekends because there weren’t many bike paths near my home.

提案: Уберите междометия и повторения, дайте более структурированный ответ с причинами и примером. Используйте связку (например, "because" или "however") и конкретный пример, чтобы показать глубину мысли. Не более 4–5 предложений.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport for convenience. However, when I was a child many of my friends owned bikes, and I used to borrow theirs to ride to the local park or school on weekends.

× I borrowed borrowed them from them.

✓ I borrowed them from my friends.

The sentence repeats 'borrowed' twice, which is a repetition error rather than a verb form error; also 'from them' is redundant after naming 'my friends'. Use a single past simple verb 'borrowed' to match the past context and a clear object 'my friends'. Suggestion: remove the duplicate word and clarify the object: 'I borrowed them from my friends.'