Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar (tense and article use), be concise and direct, and add one clear supporting reason. Keep answers natural and within 2–4 sentences. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Avoid vague phrases like "photos" which seems incorrect here.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I got one only after I became a teenager because my parents preferred me to use public transport for safety, so they didn’t allow me to ride a bike earlier.

提案: Make the response more natural and precise: state your opinion, give one or two specific reasons, and use correct collocations (e.g., "popular among teenagers," "high-powered bikes," "Royal Enfield is popular for its classic style"). Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words such as "because" or "for example."

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among teenagers, because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many people prefer high-powered models like Royal Enfield for long rides due to their classic design and strong engines.

× No, I actually don't have any bike in my childhood.

✓ No, I actually didn't have any bike in my childhood.

The sentence refers to a past time period ('in my childhood'), so the past simple tense should be used. 'Don't have' is present simple and incorrect here. Use 'didn't have' for negative past tense; also 'any bike' is acceptable but 'a bike' is more natural.

× I get it in my after completing my adolescence age.

✓ I got one after I finished my adolescence.

The action of acquiring the bike happened in the past, so use past simple 'got' not 'get'. The phrase 'after completing my adolescence age' is unnatural; use 'after I finished my adolescence' or 'after I became a teenager'. Keep the subject reference clear ('I got one').

× As my parents are very strict, they always want me to rely on public transports like bus and photos.

✓ As my parents were very strict, they always wanted me to rely on public transport like buses and metros.

The context refers to past parental behavior (childhood), so past tense 'were' and 'wanted' should be used. 'Public transports' is incorrect; 'public transport' (uncountable) or 'public transportation' is correct. 'bus and photos' is wrong — 'buses and metros' or 'buses and trains' fits. Also pronoun use is fine; this correction addresses wrong nouns and tense.

× Yes, of course bikes have a lot of craze in my country among teenagers and all citizens.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are very popular in my country among teenagers and other citizens.

The phrase 'have a lot of craze' is incorrect and unnatural. Use 'are very popular' to express widespread interest. 'All citizens' is awkward; 'other citizens' or 'many citizens' is better. The present simple 'are' correctly describes a general present fact.

× There are lot of super bikes and heavy bikes like Royal Enfield which is popular in our country are known for their extreme collections.

✓ There are a lot of superbikes and heavy motorcycles, such as Royal Enfield, which are popular in our country and are known for their extensive range.

Multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'lot', 'super bikes' should be 'superbikes' or 'super bikes' as one word; 'heavy bikes' better as 'heavy motorcycles'. The clause structure was wrong with two 'are' verbs; 'Royal Enfield' (plural reference) should be followed by 'which are popular' not 'is', and 'extreme collections' is unnatural — 'extensive range' or 'wide range' is better. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pluralization.