Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Используйте прямой ответ на вопрос экзаменатора. Здесь студент перепутал местоимение и переспросил некорректно. Дайте простой утвердительный или отрицательный ответ, затем при необходимости добавьте одно‑два коротких поддерживающих предложения (не более 5 предложений всего). Следите за правильностью местоимений и простотой структуры: тема — утверждение, затем причина или краткое описание.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in the park near my house.

提案: Говорите ясно и стройно: сначала давайте чёткий ответ (Yes/No/It depends), затем используйте связку (because/so/for example) и приведите конкретную причину или пример. Избегайте заполнителей (uh) и неясных словосочетаний. Используйте подходящую лексику (popular, convenient, healthy, transport, recreation) и приведите конкретные детали — где и почему люди катаются на велосипедах.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, city parks and bike lanes are busy at weekends, and parents often buy bikes for their children to encourage a healthy lifestyle.

× Did he have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question and used the wrong pronoun 'he' which creates a sentence structure and pronoun error. Replace with a full answer in past tense matching the question: use 'I did' to confirm and then give the past-tense statement 'I had a bike when I was a child.' This fixes subject pronoun and provides a verb, resolving the sentence structure error and ensuring correct past-tense form. Suggestion: Practice forming direct answers to yes/no questions by using 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't' followed by a brief statement in the past tense.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular instrumental child, uh, child's interest in these, uh, these, uh, physicals healthy.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular among children because they encourage physical health and interest.

The original sentence uses incorrect word choices and adjective forms ('instrumental child', 'physicals healthy') and has disfluent fillers. The corrected sentence uses the preposition 'among' with the noun 'children' and the phrase 'encourage physical health and interest' which are grammatically correct and idiomatic. This fixes adjective/adverb misuse and word order to convey the intended meaning clearly. Suggestion: Replace awkward adjective-noun combinations with common collocations (e.g., 'physical health', 'popular among children') and avoid fillers when speaking.