Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Avoid repeating the examiner's question back as your answer. Give a direct response (yes/no) and add one or two brief, specific details. Keep it natural and grammatically correct. For example, start with a topic sentence, then use a linking word to add a detail or short reason.

例: Yes, I did. When I was about eight years old I had a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it to school most days until I was twelve.

提案: Do not echo the question. State your opinion clearly and support it with a specific reason or example using a linking word (for example, because/although/so). Keep the answer under five sentences and use relevant vocabulary like "commuting", "cycling lanes", or "exercise".

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular, especially in cities, because many people use them for short commutes and there are more cycling lanes now which makes riding safer.

× Did you have a bike when you're were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The error involves incorrect pronoun and auxiliary combination: 'you're were' mixes a contraction 'you're' (you are) with the past-tense verb 'were', which is ungrammatical. The correct form uses the simple past 'were' alone for the time clause. Suggestion: remove 'you're' and use 'you were' for past reference.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct: it uses the present simple to ask about a general opinion and correctly pluralizes 'bikes' to match the subject. No change is needed.