Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Uh, hello, by the way, this is a very good questions, but uh yeah, uh, bikes popular our country because, uh, uh, kids love bike.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 20.0提案: Cevap kısa ve alakasız; sınavdaki soruyu tekrar ederek zaman kaybediyorsunuz. Doğrudan soruya cevap verin (ör. “Yes, I did” veya “No, I didn’t”), ardından 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) kullanarak nedenleri veya anıyı açıklayın. Cümle sayısını 2–4 ile sınırlayın ve kelime tekrarı ve doldurma (uh, um, by the way) kullanmayın.
例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to a nearby park every afternoon because it was my favorite way to play with friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 25.0提案: Cevap düzensiz, çok sayıda dolgu sözcüğü ve dilbilgisi hatası içeriyor. Doğrudan bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (ör. “Yes, I think bikes are quite popular.”). Sonra bağlaçlarla gerekçeler verin (because / for example). Spesifik ayrıntılar ekleyin (şehir/ülke bağlamı, yetişkin/çocuk farkı). Maksimum 3 cümle kullanın ve dolgu sözcüklerinden kaçının.
例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many children and teenagers use bicycles for short trips and play, and in some cities adults also cycle to work because traffic is heavy and cycling is cheaper.
文法
× Uh, hello, by the way, this is a very good questions, but uh yeah, uh, bikes popular our country because, uh, uh, kids love bike.
✓ Uh, hello, by the way, this is a very good question, but yes, bikes are popular in our country because kids love bikes.
Multiple issues: 1) 'questions' should be singular 'question' to match 'this' (Grammar problem type 1: Singular and plural issue). 2) Missing verb 'are' in 'bikes popular our country' (Grammar problem type 26: Sentence structure errors and 27: Subject-verb agreement). 3) Missing preposition 'in' before 'our country' (Grammar problem type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). 4) 'kids love bike' needs plural 'bikes' (Grammar problem type 1: Singular and plural issue). Suggestions: remove filler words (uh) for clarity; change 'questions' to 'question'; insert 'are' after 'bikes' and 'in' before 'our country'; use plural 'bikes' after 'love'.
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