Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise, fix minor grammar (e.g., tense and verb choice), avoid filler sounds, and add one specific detail to enrich the answer. Use a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details linked with a connector, and keep to under five sentences.

例: Yes. I had an electric bike as a child and I rode it to school almost every day because it was much faster than walking. Also, I often rode with two or three friends, which made the trip social and safe.

提案: Correct grammar and word choice (singular/plural, verbs, articles), improve coherence with linking words, and give a clearer specific example with accurate numbers or typical scenes. Limit to up to five sentences and avoid vague or incorrect expressions.

例: Yes, motorbikes are extremely popular in my country because they are affordable and can navigate congested streets easily. For instance, during weekday mornings you often see hundreds of commuters on motorbikes weaving through traffic, and many workplaces provide limited parking for cars, which encourages bike use.

× I often roll with my friends, which was fun and convenient.

✓ I often rode with my friends, which was fun and convenient.

The context is past habitual action (when I was a child), so verbs should be in past form. 'Roll' as used here is a non-standard choice; the student already used 'rode' earlier for riding a bike. Use 'rode' (past simple) to match the time frame and be idiomatic. Suggestion: use past simple for repeated past actions (I often rode with my friends).

× Of course, motorbike are very popular in my country.

✓ Of course, motorbikes are very popular in my country.

The subject should be plural to match the plural verb 'are'. 'Motorbike' is singular; when referring to the type in general, use the plural 'motorbikes'. Alternatively 'the motorbike' would need a singular verb and different meaning. Suggestion: use 'motorbikes' for general statements about many vehicles.

× A lot of people commit to work or school by motorbike because they are affordable and can easily maneuver through heavy traffic.

✓ A lot of people commute to work or school by motorbike because they are affordable and can easily maneuver through heavy traffic.

The verb 'commit' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'commute' meaning to travel regularly between home and work/school. The rest of the sentence is fine. Suggestion: replace misused verbs with the correct collocations (commute by motorbike).

× For example, in the morning you can see 1000 of peoples and officer on motorbike since parking a limit to public transport.

✓ For example, in the morning you can see 1,000 people and officers on motorbikes because parking is limited and public transport is crowded.

Multiple errors: '1000 of peoples' is ungrammatical — use '1,000 people' (people is already plural and does not take 'of'). 'Officer' should be plural 'officers' to match 'people' and general observation. 'On motorbike' should be 'on motorbikes' to match plural. 'Since parking a limit to public transport' is incorrect structure and articles: use 'because parking is limited and public transport is crowded' or similar to express reason. Suggestion: use correct plural nouns, proper numeric formatting, and clear causal clause with 'because' plus adjective and verb ('parking is limited').