Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Anda menjawab dengan mengulangi pertanyaan, jadi tidak ada jawaban sebenarnya. Berikan jawaban langsung (ya/tidak) diikuti dengan kalimat topik dan satu atau dua detail pendukung. Gunakan kata penghubung jika menambahkan informasi (mis. "so", "because", "when"). Batasi jawaban hingga maksimal 5 kalimat.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was about six, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because the park was close to my home, I rode my bike almost every day after school and on weekends. Those rides helped me feel independent and confident.

提案: Anda hanya mengulangi pertanyaan sehingga tidak ada konten. Jawab langsung dengan menyatakan pendapat (mis. "Yes, I think so" atau "No, not really"), lalu berikan alasan dan contoh spesifik. Gunakan kata penghubung (mis. "because", "for example", "however") agar alur jelas. Tetap singkat dan relevan.

例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental services, while in rural areas people often ride bicycles to the market. However, cars are still more common for longer journeys.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of providing an answer. The error is a sentence structure/response error: a question expects an answer, not repetition. Suggestion: respond with a complete declarative sentence matching the past tense of the question, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and use past tense for events in childhood.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering it. The error is a sentence structure/response error: turn the question into a declarative answer. Suggestion: answer in present tense to match the question, for example 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country.' Ensure verb form 'think' is present tense to agree with the subject.