Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó cung cấp 1–2 câu bổ sung có chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi bắt đầu, loại xe, kỷ niệm). Hạn chế độ dài tối đa 5 câu và dùng từ nối nếu thêm chi tiết.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven; it was a small red bicycle with training wheels. I used to ride it around the neighborhood with my friends every afternoon, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: Bạn chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi và không đưa ra quan điểm nào. Hãy nêu ý kiến trực tiếp (yes/no/partly), rồi giải thích với các lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ; dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, therefore). Giữ câu gọn, không quá 5 câu.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where traffic is heavy. Many people use bicycles for short commutes because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students and delivery workers often prefer bikes to avoid traffic jams.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student reply repeats the examiner's question and lacks a proper verbal answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the response should be a complete sentence with subject and verb. Suggestion: Provide a short answer matching the past tense of the question, for example 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I did not have a bike when I was a child.' Ensure subject + past tense verb are included.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply repeats the question instead of giving a declarative answer. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because the response should state the opinion with proper subject-verb structure. Suggestion: Answer using present simple to match the question, for example 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.' Use 'I think' + clause and correct verb form (are) for clarity.