Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response grammatically correct, more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly add one specific reason or memory. Use correct verb forms and articles: “When I was a child, I didn’t have a bike.” You can add a short supporting detail (reason or feeling) and keep it under 3–4 sentences. Avoid unnecessary words like “any” after negative when singular noun is used, and include linking words if you add details.

例: When I was a child, I didn’t have a bike. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I sometimes borrowed my neighbor’s bike to ride in the park.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and then provide specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., affordable, convenient, practical). Provide one or two specific examples or contexts where bikes are common. Keep to a maximum of 4–5 sentences and use linking words like “because,” “also,” or “for example.”

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many people use bicycles to commute to work or to go to the market, especially in crowded cities. Also, bicycles are easy to park and cheap to maintain, so they remain a common choice for daily travel.

× When I was child, I didn't have any bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'child' and uses 'any' with a singular countable noun 'bike'. Use 'a child' for the singular noun and 'a bike' for a single countable item. Suggestion: add the indefinite article before singular countable nouns and use 'any' with plural or uncountable nouns (e.g. 'I didn't have any bikes').

× Yes, I think bikes are.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular.

The reply 'I think bikes are.' is incomplete and omits the adjective describing bikes. Add the adjective 'popular' to complete the sentence. Ensure subject and verb agree by keeping the plural subject 'bikes' with the verb 'are'.

× Bikes are popular in my country because most of the people used bike because it's affordable, affordable most of the people and it's carrying.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country because most people used bikes in the past and because they are affordable and convenient to carry.

Multiple issues: 'used bike' mixes past construction and singular noun; 'most of the people' is wordy — prefer 'most people'; repeated word 'affordable' and awkward phrase 'it's carrying'. Correct to past reference 'used bikes in the past' if intending past habit, or use present 'use bikes' for current habit. 'It's carrying' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'convenient to carry' to describe portability. Suggestion: decide whether speaking about past habits (use past tense) or current habits (use present simple), use plural 'bikes' with quantifiers, avoid repetition, and use clear adjectives for qualities.