Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. In Part 1 you should reply directly with a short, natural answer (one topic sentence) and optionally one supporting detail. Keep it within 1–3 sentences and avoid repeating the question. For example, state whether you had a bike, give a brief detail about it, and use a linking word if adding a second point.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood every weekend.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and vague phrasing. Make the topic sentence clear, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example"). Use correct subject-verb agreement and natural expressions like "people use bikes" rather than "most of them are using." Keep to 1–3 concise sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, commuters often bike to work during rush hour to avoid traffic and children ride bikes in parks on weekends.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country. Most of them are using to go to work and to play outside the house.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country. Most people use them to go to work and to play outside the house.

The original sentence misuses the pronoun 'them' and the verb form 'are using'. 'Most of them' refers to bikes, which makes the meaning unclear; the intended subject is people, so use 'Most people'. Also, 'are using' in this context is unnatural for a habitual action; simple present 'use' should be used. Change 'them' to refer back to 'bikes' after 'Most people' by placing 'them' after the verb: 'Most people use them...'. This corrects pronoun reference and verb tense/usage for habitual actions.