Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer grammatically correct, brief, and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then optionally add one short supporting reason or detail. Use linking words if you add details. Avoid unnecessary words.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby, so I didn’t need one.

提案: Give a clear, direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and correct vocabulary. Avoid hesitations and incorrect words (e.g., 'Barack', 'by'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' and keep sentences concise (max 4–5 sentences).

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in Japan. Many people prefer cars or public transport like trains, especially in cities, because they are faster and more convenient. However, cycling is common in smaller towns and among students.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('I don't have') with a past time phrase ('when I was a child'). Use past tense to match the time reference. Change 'don't have' to 'didn't have' for correct past tense usage.

× No, I don't think Barack is probably in my country.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country.

The original sentence uses the wrong noun ('Barack') and an awkward structure ('is probably in my country'). Also 'think' with a clause about popularity requires correct subject and adjective. Replace with 'bikes are very popular' to express opinion correctly and use present simple to describe general truth.

× In my country in Japan, uh, by is not so popular because the car is more popular or bicycle or train.

✓ In my country, Japan, bikes are not very popular because cars and trains are more popular.

Multiple issues: tense and noun forms. Use plural 'bikes' to match general statement (singular/plural), use 'are not' for present simple, and use plural nouns 'cars and trains' for correct comparison. Also correct 'by' to 'bikes' and simplify phrase order for clarity.