Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and slightly longer (no more than 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar: say “Yes, I did” or “Yes, I had one.” Avoid filler words and hesitations.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. In fact, my parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident riding on busy streets by the time I was ten.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence, then support it with specific details and a linking word. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetitions and hesitations. Use vocabulary like “common,” “popular,” or “widespread,” and provide an example or reason to make your answer more convincing.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children and adults use bicycles for short trips and to commute to school or work, so you often see bike lanes and bike parking near schools and markets.

× Yes I do. I think it's popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I do. I think they're popular in my country.

The student refers to bikes (plural), so the verb and pronoun must agree in number. 'It's' (it is) is singular and incorrect for 'bikes.' Use the plural pronoun and verb 'they're' (they are) to match the plural noun. Also add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken punctuation.

× Every child have uh, every child has, uh, bike.

✓ Every child has a bike.

There are two errors: subject-verb agreement and missing article with a countable noun. 'Every child' is singular, so the correct verb is 'has' (not 'have'). Also 'bike' is a singular countable noun and needs an article: 'a bike.' Remove the repeated fragments and filler words to produce a clear sentence: 'Every child has a bike.'