Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct past-tense answer, expand slightly with one or two specific details, and avoid grammar mistakes. Use a topic sentence in past tense and add a short supporting detail linked naturally.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about seven, and I often rode it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

提案: Use clearer grammar and natural phrasing. Start with a direct opinion sentence, then give a specific reason with linking words (e.g., because, for example) and correct word order. Avoid fillers like “UH.”

例: Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and there are regular cycling events. For example, my city hosts an annual bicycle tournament that attracts hundreds of participants.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. 'I have' is present perfect and does not match the simple past context. Use 'I did' to indicate possession in the past. Alternatively, 'Yes, I had' is also correct; 'I did' is a natural short answer to 'Did you have...'. Suggestion: Reply in past tense for past-time questions, e.g. 'Yes, I had.' or 'Yes, I did.'

× Yes, I think UH bikes are popular in our country because here also have UH bicycle tournament.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because we also have a bicycle tournament here.

The original sentence has awkward word order and missing subject and article. 'Here also have' lacks a subject; English requires a subject before the verb (we have). 'UH' appears to be a filler and should be removed. 'Bicycle tournament' is countable and requires an article ('a'). Place adverbs like 'also' near the verb or subject appropriately and 'here' is more natural at the end. Suggestion: Use a clear subject-verb structure and appropriate articles: 'we also have a bicycle tournament here.'