Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Говорите более уверенно и естественно: избегайте пауз и междометий («uh», «umm»), начните с чёткой тематической фразы, затем добавьте одну-две конкретные детали. Также постарайтесь не превышать пять предложений и использовать связующее слово для плавного перехода.

例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. For example, every weekend I rode to the park with my friends, which helped me stay active and make friends.

提案: Сформулируйте ответ ясно и грамотно: используйте простое отрицание и корректную грамматику, избегайте повторов. Добавьте одно или два конкретных объяснения и свяжите идеи с помощью слов-связок (for example, because, however).

例: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer to use cars. For example, many families own cars for convenience, and there are fewer bike lanes, so cycling is less safe and less common.

× Yes, uh, when I was a child I had a bike because uh, umm, I like to go outside.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike because I liked to go outside.

The sentence mixes past tense ('was', 'had') with present tense ('like') about past habitual action. Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past when speaking about childhood; use 'liked' for habitual past actions.

× I think that's I think that a bike not popular in my country because a lot of people has have a. Machine car. Car.

✓ I think that bikes are not popular in my country because a lot of people have cars.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement and noun number. 'A bike not popular' is incorrect word order and article use; use plural 'bikes are not popular' or 'a bike is not popular'. 'People has have' should be 'people have' (people require plural verb). 'Machine car. Car.' is unclear; correct to 'cars'. Also adjust word order to 'bikes are not popular' and pluralize consistent nouns. Suggestion: use plural 'bikes' with 'are' and 'people have cars'.