Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki pemahaman pertanyaan dan jawab langsung. Di sini siswa hanya mengulangi pertanyaan, jadi berikan jawaban jelas (ya/tidak) dan tambahkan 1–2 kalimat pendukung. Gunakan struktur sederhana: topik sentence + detail. Hindari mengulang kata. Contoh langkah-langkah: 1) Jawab singkat langsung (Yes/No). 2) Jelaskan kapan atau bagaimana Anda menggunakan sepeda. 3) Berikan satu detail spesifik (mis. dengan siapa atau di mana).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. It was a small red bike with a basket, and I learned to ride it in the park near my home.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa, kelancaran, dan spesifikasi jawaban. Mulai dengan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu berikan alasan dengan linking word (because, therefore) dan contoh konkret. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan bentuk kerja serta artikel yang benar. Langkah: 1) Topik sentence (Yes/No + opinion). 2) Alasan singkat dengan kata penghubung. 3) Contoh spesifik atau keadaan nyata (mis. di kota besar, untuk perjalanan pendek).

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities many people ride bicycles to work or to the market to avoid traffic and save money.

× I think yes because everyone always go goes a bike when when we are to some place.

✓ I think so because everyone always goes by bike when we go to some place.

Two issues: subject-verb agreement and word choice/word order. Use 'so' instead of 'yes' after 'I think' for natural English. 'Everyone' is singular so the verb needs third person singular '-s' (goes) — this is a subject-verb agreement / third person singular issue (Grammar Problem Type ID 27 and 2), but per instructions only correct using listed types; therefore primary correction is Present tense issue (ID 6). Also change 'goes a bike' to 'goes by bike' (correct preposition and noun usage) and remove duplicated 'when'. Finally, change 'we are to some place' to 'we go to some place' to use the correct present-tense verb and natural word order. Suggestions: remember to add -s for third-person singular subjects, use 'by bike' to indicate mode of transport, and avoid repeating words.