Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct, concise answer (1–2 sentences) with at least one supporting detail. Use a clear topic sentence and a linking phrase for the detail. Keep it natural and avoid repeating the prompt.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, my parents bought me a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day.

提案: You turned the question back to the examiner and used unclear phrasing. Instead, state your opinion directly and support it with a reason or example. Use linking words (because, for example, however) to make the answer coherent and keep it under five sentences.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and many students and commuters choose cycling to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure/response error. To answer a past simple question, use the past simple form of the verb (had). Provide a full sentence subject + verb + object: 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' Replace the question form with a declarative past-tense statement.

× Do you think like a popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student's sentence is ungrammatical and does not follow the expected question structure. It wrongly uses 'like a popular' and lacks the noun 'bikes' as the subject. The correct question uses the subject 'bikes' and the adjective 'popular' with the verb 'are' (present simple): 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'. Alternatively, to answer that question, use 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' This fixes word order and includes the correct subject, verb, and adjective usage.