Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Исправьте неверное слово и уменьшите повторы; начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретные детали. Например: назовите предмет (bike), опишите внешний вид, когда вы его имели и как часто пользовались. Избегайте лишних повторов и ошибок в артиклях и согласовании.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small pink bicycle that I often rode around my neighborhood. I usually used it to go to my friend’s house and it had a bell and a basket.

提案: Устраните грамматические ошибки и сделайте ответ логичным: начните с прямого мнения, затем приведите конкретные причины и примеры. Используйте связующие слова (because, for example, especially) и правильные времена и артикли. Избегайте несвязанных фраз и названий, если вы не уверены в их правописании.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, electric bikes are common in cities and you can see them on almost every street, especially near markets and schools.

× Yes, I did have a bag when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The student used the wrong noun ('bag' instead of 'bike'), which is a lexical error rather than grammar; however it affects meaning and the pronoun/noun reference to the question about a bike. Suggestion: listen to the question carefully and repeat the key noun in your answer to avoid substitution errors.

× It it was pink and small.

✓ It was pink and small.

The sentence contains a duplicated word ('It it'), which is a simple typographical/repetition error. Remove the extra 'it'. Also word order 'pink and small' is acceptable, but for naturalness 'small and pink' is possible. Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch repeated words.

× Yes, I seen a bike is very popular in my country because every street have a this is electron bike in a in Pakato show.

✓ Yes, I have seen that bikes are very popular in my country because every street has an electric bike shop in Pakato.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'seen' without auxiliary is incorrect in simple past or present perfect; use 'I saw' (simple past) or 'I have seen' (present perfect). The clause 'a bike is very popular' should be plural 'bikes are very popular' to match general statement. 'every street have' has subject-verb agreement error; use 'every street has'. 'a this is electron bike in a in Pakato show' is ungrammatical and contains wrong word order and vocabulary: 'an electric bike shop in Pakato' is likely intended. Suggestions: use correct tense structure ('I have seen' + that + clause), ensure subject-verb agreement with 'every' + singular noun takes singular verb, and choose correct noun phrases ('electric bike shop').