Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with article use and sentence fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct minor grammar (use 'a bike'), and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word to make the answer more natural and informative. Keep it under five sentences.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but my father owned one. However, I often rode it with him on weekends, and those short rides helped me learn balance and road safety.

提案: Improve grammar, plural forms, and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, 'Moreover' or 'Also') and specific details. Correct plurals ('bikes', 'office workers') and simplify awkward phrases. Limit to a maximum of five concise sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many office workers use them for short commutes because they are cheap and often faster than public transport. Moreover, students frequently ride bikes to school or university since they are convenient and economical.

× No, I didn't have bike, but my father had one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but my father had one.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular countable noun 'bike'. In English, singular countable nouns generally require an article (a/an) or another determiner. Add 'a' to make it grammatically correct. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Yes, bike is a very popular vehicle in our country and most of the office worker who regularly go to office by public transport they use by.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular vehicles in our country, and most office workers who regularly go to the office by public transport use them.

Several errors: 'bike' should be plural as a general statement about popularity ('bikes are'); 'vehicle' should be plural to match; 'office worker' needs plural 'office workers'; subject-verb agreement with 'who regularly go' is fine for plural, but the clause 'they use by' is ungrammatical and redundant—use 'use them'. Also add 'the' before 'office' in the phrase 'go to the office'. This corrects pluralization and pronoun reference. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Also some students use bike to go to school or university as this is very cheap and very convenient for them.

✓ Also, some students use bikes to go to school or university, as this is very cheap and very convenient for them.

'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally; additionally add a comma after 'Also' and before 'as' for clarity. Using plural matches 'some students' and maintains consistent number. This addresses pronoun/number agreement and article use. Grammar problem type ID: 12