Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is too short and does not address the question. Give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., who it belonged to, how often you used it, a memorable experience). Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences) and use linking words like “because” or “so” when adding reasons.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident and even joined a local kids’ cycling group on weekends.

提案: Your answer is unrelated to the question. Start with a direct opinion about popularity (yes/no) and give specific reasons or examples, using linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “so.” Keep your response focused and coherent with 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes because traffic is heavy and bikes are cheaper than cars, and there are now more bike lanes and rental services available.

× Oh.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' which requires a direct answer about past possession. The original reply 'Oh.' is not an appropriate response. This is a sentence structure/response error (ID 26). Suggestion: Provide a full sentence in the past tense, e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'No, I didn't,' and add brief detail if desired, e.g., 'No, I didn't. I walked to school.'

× Because I will go back.

✓ I think bikes are still popular in my country because I will go back there soon and I have seen many people riding them.

The examiner asked 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The original reply 'Because I will go back.' is a sentence fragment and does not directly answer the question; it lacks proper structure and connection to the question (ID 26). Also the tense and logical link are unclear. Suggestion: Start with a direct opinion (Yes/No/I think), then give a clear reason using appropriate tense, e.g., 'I think so because...'; if referring to future travel, say 'I will go back soon' and explain what you expect to see or have seen previously.