Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is brief and relevant but has grammar issues and lacks development. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct the grammar (use "I didn't have a bike"), and add one or two specific supporting details (reason, feelings, or a short anecdote) using a linking word to make it coherent. Keep it under five sentences.

例: I didn't have a bike when I was a child, although my brother owned one. For example, I was more interested in reading and sports like football, so I seldom asked to borrow it. As a result, I learned to enjoy other activities instead of cycling.

提案: The answer does not address the question and contains an incorrect word (“bags” instead of "bikes"). Give a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then add a specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example"). Use relevant vocabulary about transport and popularity. Keep it concise (max five sentences).

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, in cities there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes that make cycling convenient and affordable.

× I never had a bike but my brother had.

✓ I never had a bike, but my brother did.

The sentence uses 'had' twice, causing awkwardness. Replace the second 'had' with the appropriate pro-form 'did' to avoid repetition and ensure correct auxiliary substitution in the past simple. Also add a comma before 'but' to join two independent clauses clearly. Suggestion: use 'did' as the substitute for the verb in past simple when the verb is omitted: 'my brother did.'

× Yes, in my country bags are very popular.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are very popular.

This answer does not match the examiner's question about bikes; the content word is wrong ('bags' instead of 'bikes'). Although this is primarily a lexical/content error rather than a grammatical rule in the provided list, it creates a sentence that does not answer the question. Correction replaces 'bags' with 'bikes' to make the response relevant. The sentence structure and grammar are otherwise acceptable. Suggestion: Always repeat or refer to the key noun from the question to keep the answer on topic.