Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã hiểu sai câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Cần trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi (nói có hoặc không) rồi mô tả ngắn gọn chi tiết hỗ trợ (ai tặng, loại xe, tần suất sử dụng). Sử dụng thì quá khứ phù hợp và sửa lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ (bike ≠ pie). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me on my seventh birthday, and it was a small red mountain bike. I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day because I loved being outdoors.

提案: Câu trả lời bị sai cấu trúc ngữ pháp và từ vựng không rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/It depends) và giải thích lý do cụ thể (giao thông, cơ sở hạ tầng, thói quen). Dùng thì hiện tại để nói về xu hướng hiện nay. Sử dụng từ liên kết như "because", "however" để làm rõ lập luận và tránh lặp từ.

例: I think bikes are quite popular in some cities in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. However, in rural areas cars and motorbikes are more common due to longer distances and fewer bike lanes. Overall, cycling is becoming more popular as cities improve infrastructure.

× Did you have a pie when you're a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the wrong pronoun and verb forms: 'you're' (you are) is incorrect for past context and 'pie' is a wrong noun. Use past simple 'had' and correct noun 'bike' to match the examiner's question. Also 'when you were a child' should use past tense 'were'. Suggestion: listen carefully to the question, choose appropriate vocabulary, and match tense for past events.

× Did you think prior popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The student used incorrect tense and wrong word order: 'Did you think' asks about past, but examiner asked present opinion; 'prior popular' is ungrammatical and wrong word choice. Use present simple 'Do you think' for current opinions and 'bikes are popular' as the subject and adjective. Suggestion: for general opinions use 'Do you think' + clause in present simple, and maintain correct noun and adjective order (bikes + are + popular).