Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Исправьте грамматику времени и избегайте ненужных пауз и слов-паразитов. Ответ должен быть более связным: начните с прямого утверждения в прошедшем времени, затем при необходимости добавьте одно-два предложения с деталями (например, кто вам её подарил, где вы катались, какие воспоминания о ней). Используйте связующие слова (for example, when, because) для плавности.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle that my parents bought me for my tenth birthday, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend because I loved feeling free outdoors.

提案: Улучшите грамматику согласования подлежащего и сказуемого и добавьте конкретные причины или примеры для обоснования мнения. Начните с чёткого мнения, затем поясните с использованием связующих слов (for example, because, due to) и конкретных деталей о том, где и почему люди используют велосипеды.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute in cities because they are cheap and convenient, and there are also dedicated bike lanes in several urban areas which encourage cycling.

× Yes, I have a bike. Umm, WhatsApp.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

Student used present tense 'have' but the question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so past tense 'had' should be used. Change present simple to past simple to match the time reference. Suggestion: Pay attention to time markers (e.g., 'when I was a child') and use past tense verbs for actions or states in the past.

× Yes, I think bikes is very popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the verb must be the plural form 'are' instead of 'is'. This is a subject-verb agreement error. Suggestion: Identify whether the subject is singular or plural and choose the corresponding verb form (singular subject -> 'is', plural subject -> 'are').