Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response repeats the examiner's question and contains a pronunciation/spelling error (“buy” instead of “bike”), so it does not answer the question. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), add one or two brief supporting details, and keep it natural and concise. Also listen carefully and correct pronunciation mistakes: say “bike” clearly. Use linking words like “and” or “because” if adding details.

例: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to my friend’s house and to the park after school, and it helped me become more independent.

提案: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. To improve, respond directly with an opinion (e.g., Yes/No/It depends) and follow with specific supporting reasons or examples. Use linking words such as “because” or “for example” to make your answer coherent, and keep the response within about 2–4 sentences.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and shared-bike services that make cycling convenient.

× Did you have a buy when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'buy' which is a verb meaning to purchase; the intended noun is 'bike'. This is not a grammatical rule from the provided list but a lexical error. Replace the incorrect word with the correct noun 'bike' to make the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct. Suggestion: pay attention to similar-sounding words and choose the correct part of speech (noun 'bike' rather than verb 'buy').

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct: present simple question using 'do' for general opinion, plural noun 'bikes' matches the verb form, and word order is correct. No change needed.