Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ студента недостаточно ясен и развернут. Он просто повторил вопрос и затем дал короткий, неструктурированный ответ с ошибками (например, «he has» вместо «we had/people have»). Следует сначала прямо ответить на вопрос (короткое предложение), затем добавить 1–2 поддерживающих предложения с конкретными деталями, используя связки (for example, because, so) и корректную лексику. Также важно избегать заполнителей («uh», «umm») и поправить грамматику в выборе местоимений и времен.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to go to school and visit my friends. For example, I would ride about ten minutes each way, which was faster and more fun than walking.

× I think he has because it's, uh, so good. Umm, transport for, uh, short distance.

✓ I think they are because bikes are very useful for short distances.

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