Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Good direct response and relevance. To improve, make the answer slightly more natural and add one specific detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences and avoid simple repetition (e.g., avoid restating "when I was a child").

例: Yes — I had a bike and used to ride it to school with my friends. For example, we would meet at the corner every morning and race to class, which made the trip fun and helped me stay active.

提案: The answer directly addresses the question and gives reasons, but it is slightly repetitive and wordy. To improve, structure the reply with a clear topic sentence, use linking words (e.g., "because" then "for example"), and add one specific example or consequence. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., 'cycling' vs 'bicycles') and avoid redundant phrases like 'roads... roads'.

例: I don't think cycling is very popular in my country because the traffic is heavy and cycling infrastructure is limited. For example, there are few bike lanes in my city, so many people feel it's unsafe to ride and prefer using cars or buses.

× I rode to school every day with my friends.

✓ I rode my bike to school every day with my friends.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but omits the instrument 'my bike', which makes the meaning less explicit. This is not strictly a preposition error but adding 'my bike' clarifies what was ridden. Suggestion: include the object of 'rode' when context requires clarity (use the noun directly after the verb or use 'rode on my bike').

× Well, I don't think bicycles are popular in my country because the roads are not efficient enough to ride anywhere else and the roads are often busy and not very safe for cycling.

✓ Well, I don't think bicycles are popular in my country because the roads are not suitable for riding and are often busy and unsafe for cycling.

The phrase 'not efficient enough to ride anywhere else' is awkward: 'efficient' is not the correct adjective to describe roads for cycling. Use 'suitable' or 'safe' instead. Also 'to ride anywhere else' is vague; 'for riding' is more natural. Combine clauses to avoid repetition ('roads are... and are often...'). Suggestion: use appropriate adjectives ('suitable', 'safe') and concise phrasing ('for riding' or 'for cycling').