Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要用正确时态并且句子更简洁、有条理。可以先用一句主题句直接回答（使用过去时），然后用一到两句具体补充信息（如年龄、学会骑车所用时间）。避免多余填充词（如 uh, what）和重复。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight years old. I practiced riding it for a year or two before I felt completely confident.

提案: 回答要连贯并提供更具体的例子或原因来支持观点。使用恰当时态和连词使句子流畅，避免重复短句。可以说明在哪些场合人们常用自行车或给出比较。

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. I often see many parked along the streets by the roadside, especially near schools and markets, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips.

× I do have a bike when I was a child and what, that's when I was about, uh, eight years old and I got my first bike and I studied for a long time for about one year or two.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child. I was about eight years old when I got my first bike, and I practiced for a long time — about one or two years.

错误类型：过去时问题（Past tense issue）。解释：原句中 “I do have a bike when I was a child” 使用了现在时助动词 do have，但描述的是过去发生的事情，应该用过去时“had”。此外“I studied for a long time for about one year or two” 用了 study（学习/读书）而非练习骑车的动词，且时间表达“for about one year or two” 语序不自然，改为“practiced ... about one or two years”。建议：描述过去经历时一致使用过去时；用更恰当的动词（practiced/exercised）并把时间表达放在合适位置。

× Yes it yes they are. When I went home alongside the road I can see many bikes lying beside the streets and bikes are used. Very popular.

✓ Yes, they are. When I go home along the road, I can see many bikes parked beside the street. Bikes are very popular.

错误类型：现在时问题（Present tense issue）。解释：原句混用了过去时“When I went home”与现在时“I can see”，且口语重复“Yes it yes they are”。应根据说话习惯选择时态，如果描述经常性的现象应使用现在时："When I go home... I can see..."。另外“lying beside the streets” 用词不当，bikes 更常说“parked”；“beside the streets” 改为单数“the street”或“the streets”视上下文，且最后一句不完整，应合并为完整句“Bikes are very popular.” 建议：描述经常发生的事实用一般现在时，避免不必要的重复，使用更自然的搭配（go home along the road / see / parked）。