Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal ama dilbilgisi ve tutarlılık eksiklikleri var. Geçmişten bahsederken "do" yerine geçmiş zaman kullanmalı ("did/ had"), ve cümleleri daha akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar eklemelidir. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrar ve fazla uzun kelime dizilerinden kaçının. Örneğin: konu cümlesiyle başlayın, sonra 1–2 destekleyici ayrıntı verin (renk, süs, neden sevdiğiniz).

例: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike with wing stickers on the frame, and I loved it because it looked pretty and was easy to ride. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every weekend.

提案: Cevap eksik ve tamamlanmamış; net bir görüş belirtin ve bunu gerekçelerle destekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak fikirlerinizi genişletin (e.g. "because", "however", "for example"). Ayrıca ölçü veya karşılaştırma vererek daha spesifik olun.

例: Not really. Unfortunately, bikes are not very popular in my country because the roads are often crowded and there are few safe bike lanes. For example, most people prefer cars or scooters for commuting, especially in big cities.

× Yes I do. When I was a child I have a pink bike with wing stickers on it and it was pretty beautiful.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a child I had a pink bike with wing stickers on it and it was very pretty.

The student uses present tense verbs ('do', 'have') when referring to past events. Use past simple for completed actions in the past: 'did' and 'had'. Also 'pretty beautiful' is redundant; use 'very pretty' or 'beautiful'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent by using past simple for past time markers like 'when I was a child'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× No, unfortunately like.

✓ No, unfortunately they are not very popular.

The original fragment 'No, unfortunately like.' is incomplete and ungrammatical; it lacks a clear subject and verb. The examiner asked about popularity, so respond with a full clause that addresses the question. Suggestion: provide a complete sentence with subject and verb, e.g. 'No, unfortunately they are not very popular.' Grammar problem type ID: 26