Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question and did not answer. For a higher score, answer directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two brief supporting details (using linking words if needed), keep it natural and avoid redundancy, and limit length to about 2–4 sentences. Provide specific details (e.g. age when you learned to ride, who taught you, what kind of bike it was).

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and my father taught me to ride in our neighborhood park. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt confident quickly and by the next summer I could ride without help.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is brief and contains some grammar and vocabulary inaccuracies. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, adding a specific reason or example, and linking words to connect ideas. Use plural and article forms correctly (e.g. "many kinds of bikes"). Aim for 2–4 coherent sentences and include a specific detail such as types of riders, common uses (commuting, recreation), or a statistic if known.

例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute and exercise. For example, you can see children with small bikes, adults on city bikes, and enthusiasts riding road or mountain bikes on weekends. As a result, cities often have bike lanes and parking areas to accommodate them.

× We have so many kind of bike for kids, for adults.

✓ We have so many kinds of bike for kids and adults.

The noun phrase 'many kind of bike' is incorrect: 'many' requires a plural count noun ('kinds') and 'of' should connect to the plural noun. Also use parallel coordination 'kids and adults' rather than 'for kids, for adults' to be more natural. Suggestion: use 'many kinds of bikes' or 'many kinds of bike' (both acceptable), e.g. 'We have many kinds of bikes for kids and adults.'

× We have so many kind of bike for kids, for adults.

✓ We have so many kinds of bike for kids and adults.

The repeated preposition 'for' is unnecessary; use a single preposition 'for' followed by a coordinated noun phrase 'kids and adults' or omit it and write 'kinds of bike for kids and adults.' Remove the extra comma. Suggestion: 'We have many kinds of bikes for kids and adults.'