Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be grammatically accurate, concise and add one or two specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, then give a short supporting detail using a linking word. Correct verb tense and word order are important.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was a child, and I often rode it to visit my grandparents. Because the streets near our house were quiet, I felt safe riding around the neighborhood.

提案: Answer directly, then give a specific reason or example using a linking word. Use correct sentence structure and collocations (e.g., “popular in my country” or “people often ride bikes”). Avoid word-for-word literal translations.

例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are an inexpensive and convenient way to travel short distances. For example, many students and workers commute by bike to avoid traffic and save money.

× Yes I did. I have a bike where I child.

✓ Yes I did. I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence has multiple issues: wrong tense and incorrect word choice/order. The student uses present tense 'have' but the question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so past tense 'had' is required (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue and ID 5: Past tense issue). 'Where I child' is ungrammatical word order and missing words; the correct phrase is 'when I was a child' using the subordinating conjunction 'when' and the past form of the verb 'to be' ('was'). Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time reference (use past tense for past situations) and use the standard temporal clause 'when I was a child.'

× Yes I do. In my country ride a bike is a popular.

✓ Yes I do. Riding a bike is popular in my country.

This sentence has incorrect word order and verb form. The activity should use the gerund 'Riding' (Verb + -ing form, Grammar Problem Type ID 8) as the subject of the sentence. The adjective 'popular' should follow the subject complement pattern; place the location phrase 'in my country' after the verb phrase for natural English order. Also the original 'is a popular' incorrectly uses the article 'a' with an adjective alone (Article errors, Grammar Problem Type ID 22); remove 'a' or add a noun (for example, 'a popular activity'). Suggestion: use the gerund 'Riding' as the subject and correct word order: 'Riding a bike is popular in my country.'