Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, but it is short and repetitive. To improve, start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., reasons, brief consequence or memory) using a linking word to make it coherent. Also avoid repeating the word "bike" too often by using synonyms (e.g., bicycle) or pronouns.

例: No, I didn't have a bicycle as a child because my family couldn't afford one. Consequently, I never learned to ride, so I usually walked or took the bus to school.

提案: Your response expresses agreement but has grammar errors, awkward phrasing, and repetition. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural and prepositions), and one or two specific supporting details (who uses bikes, common purposes, or a comparison) with linking words to add coherence.

例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes and shopping, and in some cities cycling is faster than driving because of traffic.

× In my countries bikes are really popular.

✓ In my country bikes are really popular.

The noun 'country' should be singular because the speaker refers to their own country (one). Using 'countries' (plural) conflicts with the possessive 'my' in this context. Use singular 'country' when referring to the nation you belong to. To improve, note whether you mean one country (my country) or multiple countries (my countries) and match singular/plural accordingly.

× Everyone goes to everywhere with them.

✓ Everyone goes everywhere with them.

The phrase 'to everywhere' is incorrect because 'everywhere' is an adverb of place that does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'goes everywhere'. Remove the preposition 'to'. Also, consider more natural phrasing: 'Everyone goes everywhere by bike' or 'Everyone goes everywhere using them' to clarify what 'them' refers to.