Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn đã lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Cần trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (có/không + mô tả), rồi thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ cụ thể. Tránh quá dài; tối đa 3–4 câu là đủ. Sử dụng từ nối nếu có ý bổ sung (for example, because, so).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with a basket, and I used it to ride to my friend’s house every afternoon. For example, I often rode along the park path because it was safe and quiet.

提案: Bạn lại nhắc lại câu hỏi thay vì đưa ra quan điểm. Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No/It depends) và nêu lí do cụ thể kèm ví dụ. Dùng liên từ (however, because, for instance) để mạch lạc. Tránh chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi; thể hiện ý kiến và minh họa cụ thể.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in small towns and among students. This is because they are cheap and convenient for short trips; for instance, many university students cycle to campus every day to avoid traffic.

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The sentence is missing the definite article 'a' before 'child'. In English we say 'a child' when referring to a non-specific child (yourself in the past). Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct. Suggestion: always include appropriate articles (a/an/the) before singular countable nouns when required.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple tense appropriately to ask about general truth or opinion. No changes needed.