Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a past-tense, full response that directly answers the question with a topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct tense (past) and avoid one-word answers. Keep it natural and no more than five sentences.

例: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I rode it to school every day. Because my neighborhood was quiet and safe, I practiced riding with my friends in the park, which helped me become confident on the road.

提案: Provide a fuller, more structured answer: start with a clear opinion sentence, then add specific reasons and examples using linking words (for example, because, for instance, moreover). Use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague phrases like “many people.”

例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, in big cities there are many cycle lanes and bike-sharing schemes, so a lot of commuters choose cycling for short trips. Moreover, cycling is promoted for health and environmental reasons, which encourages more people to use bikes regularly.

× Yes, I have.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a past-tense question ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') so the student should answer in past tense. 'Yes, I have' mixes present tense with a past question and is ungrammatical here. Use 'Yes, I did' to match past simple. Alternatively, a full sentence like 'Yes, I had a bike' is also correct and clearer.

× Yeah, because I saw many people cycling.

✓ Yes, because I see many people cycling.

The examiner asked a general question about current popularity ('Do you think bikes are popular in your country?'), which requires present-tense reference. The student's reply uses past tense 'saw', implying a single past observation. To express a general, ongoing situation, use present simple 'see' or 'I see many people cycling' or 'Yes, because I often see many people cycling.' This aligns tense with the question and conveys habitual action.