Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You did not provide an answer. For this question, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific supporting details (e.g., how old you were, how often you rode it, a memorable experience). Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences) and use simple linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was about six years old. I rode it almost every day after school because my parents encouraged me to play outside, and I remember learning to balance without training wheels in our park.

提案: You did not provide an answer. For this question, start with a clear opinion (yes/no/it depends), then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words such as “because,” “for example,” or “however” to make your response coherent. Keep it natural and limited to 3–5 sentences and use vocabulary relevant to transport and culture.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities there are bike lanes and rental schemes, although they are less common in rural areas due to longer distances.

× Student:

✓ Student: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original answer is missing (sentence without a verb / no response). This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Provide a complete response that fits the past tense question 'Did you have...'? Use simple past 'had' and include a subject and verb. Suggestion: answer in a full sentence or at least a short clause such as 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Student:

✓ Student: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original answer is missing (sentence without a verb / no response). This is a sentence structure error (type 26). For the present-tense question 'Do you think...?' use present simple 'I think' and keep 'bikes are popular' as the complement. Suggestion: answer fully, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.'