Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse est correcte mais trop brève. Ajoutez une phrase de détail pour expliquer pourquoi vous n'en aviez pas ou ce que vous utilisiez à la place. Utilisez un lien logique pour connecter les idées (par exemple «because» ou «so»). Gardez les réponses naturelles et limitées à 2–4 phrases.

例: No, I didn't. My family couldn't afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. I remember sometimes borrowing a neighbour's bike on weekends, but I never owned one.

提案: La réponse manque de clarté et d'organisation. Donnez un point de vue clair, puis soutenez-le avec 1–2 raisons précises en utilisant des mots de liaison appropriés (for example, "because", "although"). Evitez les répétitions et les fragments incomplets; expliquez ce que vous entendez par «airway» ou «highways» si c'est pertinent.

例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because the roads are very busy and there are few dedicated cycle lanes. As a result, many people prefer cars or public transport for safety and convenience.

× No, I don't think so. Because the airway, the highways, because I don't know.

✓ No, I don't think so, because of the highways and airways, and I'm not sure why.

The original response is a fragmentary set of clauses joined by 'because' and lacks a clear main clause and proper connectors. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The speaker should combine ideas into a complete sentence: start with the main clause ('No, I don't think so') and follow with a reason using 'because' plus a clear noun phrase ('because of the highways and airways'). Adding 'and I'm not sure why' expresses uncertainty politely. Also reorder 'highways and airways' for natural collocation and include preposition 'of' after 'because' when it introduces a noun phrase. Suggestions: combine fragments into one or two complete sentences, avoid starting clauses with 'Because' without attaching them to a main clause, and use 'because of' when giving reasons with nouns.